Third Quarter Submission
This is my third quarter submission. We made 3 main revisions, including cutting the intro time in half, adding a scene to make the time range, and re-filming the bedroom scene. We re-filmed the bedroom scene because there was minor mistakes. For example, the marker was red in one shot, and black in the other. This gave us the chance to add more action, hoping to reach 2 minutes. All in all, I am very happy with this revised product.